Hello! I was kind of experimenting on this one. I tried to make it so that it it seems that shes looking over her shoulder or maybe just having her head leaned facing foreward, makes it look even creepier. I don't know if it worked I havnt really asked anyone xD. But I liked the end result and I thought it was fitting for this up coming season
I like the little strand on her right eye. It looks almost like her skin is melting and freezing again right there. However, I feel like the patch of skin on her cheek seems more like tape than skin and that maybe making it less loose and more pronounced with maybe stretch marks on the ends, cracks running in it with jagged holes or torn holes like with cloth would give it a better effect than what you have now. I really love the craziness of her hair and the almost dead look on her face with all the chaos going on around her. Gives it a creepy effect. A little more chaos or motion around her might make it look more surreal, though. Overall I think it's more surreal than creepy and that even though it could've been tweaked in a few places you did a good job with the concept you had in mind. Sorry for the attempt at a critique. Just sort of felt like one was needed .u.
Btw I adore your channel! Brofist! ^_^